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Re: Divided Heart
Wow, this was really good! Hahaha, the ending made me laugh a little. I mean, triplets? That's very interesting, and I never saw it coming. Your poem flowed very well ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: The Street Corner Symphony ch. 2
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Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Zuli
Again, you color very well! The only thing is that the neck looks way too fat for this girl. Try making it a bit more slender and long, especially if ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Kirraley
Well first of all, I have to say... you can color amazingly well! But it still needs some work. The position of the head is way off from the face. ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: Through the cracks
Wow, this is really beautiful! The flower really does look amazing! And even though it is a bit blurry, I think it was the perfect touch to it! Makes it ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Whispering Hope
My entry for the 150 words contest. My topic was challenging gender roles. Please, tear it up and put it back together. :mrgreen: I want to make this the best ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Where the wind blows
And yet another poem by me. It's a pretty simple piece. And it reminds me of a child's poem :mrgreen: Hahaha, I guess it's because I was feeling very rhyme-y ...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: My photography
Wow! These photographs are absolutely beautiful! I really love the first one, it definitely does portray the beauty and color of a natural world. (Where on earth did you find ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: War of Contradiction
Oh wow, this is absolutely beautiful! Usually, many poems I read don't exactly flow very well especially when their rhyming. Although with yours, it's the exact opposite! I really like ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: The Mouse
Oh wow, I never thought about it in that way. Simply spectacular! There aren't any grammar or spelling mistakes, and it was really well done. But just remember that there's ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Teardrops From Heaven
Yes, finally! A piece of writing that has a clear and very important moral! Finely done; really, it's amazing. The way you describe it all really makes it hard not ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare Cover (edit)
Oh my, this is absolutely stunning! The eyes are beautiful and I just love the way you made everything else neutral so that the eyes could pop out. I think ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Be honest.
Wow, I could actually feel all of Brady's rage radiate on my computer screen. Ha-ha. This was really good, and I liked it a lot. Although, when you wrote "I ...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: The Revelations of a Skipping Stone
Wow, this piece has such beautiful imagery and description. Wonderful job! It was like reading a very magical moment. The only errorr I see is that you put some dashes ...
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: This Ain't a Movie
Awww, this is so sad for the main character. Although, I really did liked this piece. I always thought--no--knew that you had feelings for me. This is the only sentence ...
Jul 25, 2011
