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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Divided Heart

    Wow, this was really good! Hahaha, the ending made me laugh a little. I mean, triplets? That's very interesting, and I never saw it coming. Your poem flowed very well ...

    Aug 12, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Street Corner Symphony ch. 2

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    Aug 11, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Zuli

    Again, you color very well! The only thing is that the neck looks way too fat for this girl. Try making it a bit more slender and long, especially if ...

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Kirraley

    Well first of all, I have to say... you can color amazingly well! But it still needs some work. The position of the head is way off from the face. ...

    Aug 11, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Through the cracks

    Wow, this is really beautiful! The flower really does look amazing! And even though it is a bit blurry, I think it was the perfect touch to it! Makes it ...

    Aug 10, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Whispering Hope

    My entry for the 150 words contest. My topic was challenging gender roles. Please, tear it up and put it back together. :mrgreen: I want to make this the best ...

    Aug 10, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Where the wind blows

    And yet another poem by me. It's a pretty simple piece. And it reminds me of a child's poem :mrgreen: Hahaha, I guess it's because I was feeling very rhyme-y ...

    Aug 8, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: My photography

    Wow! These photographs are absolutely beautiful! I really love the first one, it definitely does portray the beauty and color of a natural world. (Where on earth did you find ...

    Aug 6, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: War of Contradiction

    Oh wow, this is absolutely beautiful! Usually, many poems I read don't exactly flow very well especially when their rhyming. Although with yours, it's the exact opposite! I really like ...

    Aug 1, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Mouse

    Oh wow, I never thought about it in that way. Simply spectacular! There aren't any grammar or spelling mistakes, and it was really well done. But just remember that there's ...

    Jul 29, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Teardrops From Heaven

    Yes, finally! A piece of writing that has a clear and very important moral! Finely done; really, it's amazing. The way you describe it all really makes it hard not ...

    Jul 29, 2011
  • Other Re: Stop and Stare Cover (edit)

    Oh my, this is absolutely stunning! The eyes are beautiful and I just love the way you made everything else neutral so that the eyes could pop out. I think ...

    Jul 27, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Be honest.

    Wow, I could actually feel all of Brady's rage radiate on my computer screen. Ha-ha. This was really good, and I liked it a lot. Although, when you wrote "I ...

    Jul 27, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Revelations of a Skipping Stone

    Wow, this piece has such beautiful imagery and description. Wonderful job! It was like reading a very magical moment. The only errorr I see is that you put some dashes ...

    Jul 26, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: This Ain't a Movie

    Awww, this is so sad for the main character. Although, I really did liked this piece. I always thought--no--knew that you had feelings for me. This is the only sentence ...

    Jul 25, 2011


Why should Caesar just get to stomp around like a giant while the rest of us try not to get smushed under his big feet? Brutus is just as cute as Caesar, right? Brutus is just as smart as Caesar, people totally like Brutus just as much as they like Caesar, and when did it become okay for one person to be the boss of everybody because that's not what Rome is about! We should totally just stab Caesar!
— Gretchen Wieners