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Hope you like it, guys! XD And if you have a better idea for the title, PLEASE share... =_=' I like to think your world is silent Whenever you’re not ...

Like a song that never ends it is the mystery of depths and gore alike. Of fallen birds and sunken treasure and sometimes broken little wings. Suffused in anger longing ...

Two more thing! If you put all the chapters together at once, it's seems WAY too long and clustered. Instead, make this into a novel and create its own page ...

First of all, welcome to YWS!! Your story is pretty good so far, and there's only a few errors that I saw, so good job! Second, I see absolutely no ...

Because they're scared how people might react if they say something. They don't want to be even more of a loser (even though they're not!!) than they make themselves to ...

"Challenge accepted," I smirked, treasuring the astonishment on my worst enemy's face. I have nothing if not pride. So I sucked it in, and held on for dear life for ...

Wow, that was really short! Haha, but it was still really wonderful. I think you've captured a sense of mystery very well, and I can't wait to read more of ...

If you're describing "The Swan" in the Carnival of Animals by Saint Saens, then BRAVO! If that piece was to be interpreted into words, this would be exactly it. "The ...

A very pretty poem, I like it a lot. It's absolutely true and I bet A LOT of people can relate to that kind of stinging feeling. The rhythm was ...

Honestly, this is really amazing! You draw wonderfully, and your shading is fantastic! The only thing is that the dragons look a tad too fat. XD In a way, their ...

Hopefully, this sounds more like a guy. Also, I think I need some help with paragraphing the dialogue as well. :mrgreen: Chapter 2: Rock Bottom The sharp bite of a ...

Bravo! This was absolutely beautiful! Best Buddies is a wonderful program! And I really think you should show her this; she would really be happy if you did. ^_^ Reading ...

Very pretty, and absolutely true! The only thing is that "God" should always be capitalized when it's his name! Oh wait, and since it's a poem, you should really write ...

If you don't know, the Morning Star is actually the devil. (He was just called that before he became a fallen angel). The reason I wrote this was because I've ...

First of all, welcome to YWS! Glad you could join us. =D (And) Yay! A music fan! I love music too, so naturally I was drawn to your title. I ...