the-rainbow-dreamer

I suppose it is possible that it could have happened. Well thought about I thought. I think Ravenclaw was a Eagel, not a raven. Just watch out for capital letters ...

It brought a tear to my eye..... Well I thought the part when George saw Fred's body was very good because it showed us how he felt when he saw ...

That was so cute!!! I do normally read Ron and Hermione fanfiction but I will now because those two are really meant for eachother. You described the feelings and setting ...

The last line added to the tension I thought. You use a lot of descriptive words e.g. Her corpse lying on the drawing room floor, her left side caked with ...