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Thank you! I will definitely PM you when I post more. I'm writing some now!

Why does this have only two stars?? You need to get more people to review your writing. I like this a LOT more than your other story. So... six platinum ...

Let me comment on the plot. It's very mysterious and I'm very intrigued by how it's going to continue. What I would say is that the flow is sometimes jarred ...

The wind danced through her hair, tousling her long brown locks. A feeling of hostility lingered in her blood as she rose from her position, bare feet pressing against the ...

Ahhh, your reply made me smile! Thank you very much! I'm going to continue this, possibly write the first chapter before I go to sleep. =D It's thats classyy x, ...

This was... amazing. I loved it. The few things I found wrong with it wasn't major, just a matter of quick hands. ^__^ was medium heigth, but very skinny, almost ...

I want to start writing a novel, something that will actually go somewhere. I need as much criticism as I can get. Thank you (: - - - - - ...

I think the way you write is lovely, the way you string your words together are presented very nicely. I feel as if this is almost too... cliche? I mean, ...

Hi, This was very good. You keep the reader interested and describe the character well. You make it easy to feel somewhat what the character is feeling. ...and he mind ...

So, this is chapter one of a story I decided to start at ... 1:30 AM. I know it isn't very good, I really wanna improve though. My punctuation is ...