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  • Welcome Mat Re: Greetings and Salutations!

    Thanks everyone! In response to a couple questions: Converse all the way. Fiction, I couldn't write poetry to save my life. I like pretty much every genre imaginable, except for ...

    Sep 30, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Greetings and Salutations!

    Hello, my name is Anna. I'm a smiley addict, I like Doctor Who, Prison Break, and Buffy the Vampire Slayer, and I have a blonde alter ego. :P 8) And ...

    Sep 29, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: How You Pick Your Avatar

    Ditto silverSUNLIGHTx and Clo. Iconator is pretty much my go to place for avatars. Choosing one really depends on my mood.

    Sep 26, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: A Dream Born Crooked (Chapter 1)

    This confused me. Okay, so I know he's going somewhere, a trip, and I know what his job is but for the first chapter it doesn't give you much of ...

    Sep 26, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: A dream (Part 1 of 3... still working!)

    Perhaps there is a message or moral that I'm just not seeing. I liked the way it was written, and the first two-thirds of it was interesting, but there wasn't ...

    Sep 26, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: SITY: Sanchez's Intstitute for Troubled Youth

    Wow, I love it. The morbid thoughts of the narrator were interesting, I just liked the whole idea of SITY. My grammar nitpicking: SITY: Sanchez's Intstitue for Troubled Youth Institute. ...

    Sep 26, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: Chapter 1 of Queen Esmeralda

    I'm not a great critique of grammar, but I have to say it was a bit confusing. You have some GREAT metaphors and similes, though, and it was an interesting ...

    Sep 26, 2008


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