thatannagirl

First off, I don't want to spend my time critiquing rubbish. Period. This isn't rubbish; it has a potential to be a decent beginning. Grammar nitpicking: a twig snapped behind ...

That's a bummer, I haven't explored that far yet. 4/10. It was fine but a rather boring subject. I'm small-chested and no one wants to read about how I (don't) ...

In a VERY late response to your question... YES! And do I mutter "that's what she said" to myself under my breath after half of what people say? YES. ;)

7/10, I don't know where it from, but I like it. ;)

Yes, I liked it. What I had time to read. :) I always find it fun to write cool/weird/mysterious scenes without knowing what in the world is going on, but ...

Besides the fact that it was obvious that the main character was a vampire, that a beautiful girl is alone in a building that is all but falling apart, that ...

Hey, I'm the first to post! :) First off, I don't have much time before I get booted off the computer so I'll make this snappy. I've only read the ...

drugs

8/10 Is it from a movie? Rate my avatar.

Headache.

Ticket to Ride in your pants.

7/10. Spell check is there for a reason, but nice variety of topics. Rate my Signature.

Cool story, though not overly creepy, it was good. I think you would benefit by showing instead of telling a little more. Also, you said described the vampire's skin as ...

Great, I can't wait to see the next chapter. *gold star for you*

Welcome, from one newb to another. :) Quick: fav tv show?