thajaro

Um... I think you forgot to change some of the names at the end, so you should probably do that before too many people read this. Other than that, I ...

First of all, I love it. You are very descriptive, but not overly, and I can easily see in my mind's eye what you are writing about. The one thing ...

Good story. Confusing a lot of the time, but good. The line "as sure as there are words on this page" sounded very poetic, it pulled me right in. and ...

WOW. That was an amazing (if somewhat stereotypical of high fantasy) prologue. I started reading it thinking it would be just another LOTR remake where the two dominant races were ...

Great story! Now I'm dying to know who the second winner was...Jack Frost? The plot seemed kind of confusing at first, did the judges know exactly what they wanted Santa ...