tfioslove

I love this poem. I think it would be beneficial if you used some periods instead of just commas and semicolons, to allow the reader to pause. I loved the ...

I really like the idea behind this poem. I think you could add more impact to the message if you didn't capitalize each of the lines. Capitalizing the lines adds ...

I really love the repetition of the one person , it feels like a personal message. the ending should just be that is you, i think that would have more ...

I really love the repetition of the one person , it feels like a personal message. the ending should just be that is you, i think that would have more ...