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I love this poem. I think it would be beneficial if you used some periods instead of just commas and semicolons, to allow the reader to pause. I loved the ...

I really like the idea behind this poem. I think you could add more impact to the message if you didn't capitalize each of the lines. Capitalizing the lines adds ...

I really like the idea behind this poem. There were a few grammatical errors with contractions and spelling, but i really enjoyed the contradictions inside each of the lines. I ...