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Re: ...Make Lemonade
AWESOME!!!!! That was very entertaining to read. You are very talented! The title tricked me into thinking of children with a lemonade stand. Nice work, really. I LOOOOOOOVED IT!!!!!! Change ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Story Competition Entry
Well... To be honest, I think the story was a little dull. Your hook was not very inviting to your story, and to pertain the readers attention, you need to ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Memories of Becoming Beautiful
Oh my gosh!!! That was one of the most moving stories i have ever read!!! It made me realize now that, all you have to do to be beautiful, is ...
Jun 27, 2011