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  • Short Story » General, General Re: ...Make Lemonade

    AWESOME!!!!! That was very entertaining to read. You are very talented! The title tricked me into thinking of children with a lemonade stand. Nice work, really. I LOOOOOOOVED IT!!!!!! Change ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Story Competition Entry

    Well... To be honest, I think the story was a little dull. Your hook was not very inviting to your story, and to pertain the readers attention, you need to ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Memories of Becoming Beautiful

    Oh my gosh!!! That was one of the most moving stories i have ever read!!! It made me realize now that, all you have to do to be beautiful, is ...

    Jun 27, 2011


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price