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It is nice, yet depressing, but thats okay because I don't show much emotion. Meloncholy! Anyways, it is pretty good, however, you may want to check the grammer. One sentince ...

name:Jacob Black age:16 race:Native American Werewolf tribe appereance: dark skin, tall, muscular, short black hair. history: Did not know he was a werewolf until he transformed one night when his ...

name: Wilhelm Haiza Kurtz --(actuall is Jacob Myers but adding book character for effect) Age:20(115)--(14) Race:European. Leader of the German Vamps yet still under the leader of Europe, Serenity. ap

Well, I'm guessing that this is a love story about a girl who gets used then abused. Depressing. However, nice use of situations. It seems that, it could happen.

I am usually not one for poetry, which it seems this is some, but it is okay for a piece. You may want to sum it up however. For a ...

I'm Jacob and I am writing a story but then agian who isn't here. I want to be an author. I have an imagination and I like to write.

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