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"Comander! The troops have been deployed! The Newborns are going crazy, they have attacked Moscow" "Okay, assign more yearlings to control them" "And sir, The chinese have invaded Estonia! They ...

I will like to start by stating that Germany's spies have found multiple squadrons of the chinese enemy along the russian border. They are newborns so not much of a ...

sakura walked down the dark alley smelling the scent of the killer. She saw a slight movement in the corner of her eye. "I have finally found you!" She spoke ...

and here begins another segment of the book. two new arrivals. name: Wilhelm Haiza Kurtz --(actuall is Jacob Myers but adding book character for effect) Age:20(115)--(14) Race:European. Leader of the ...

It seems like a love poem and I don't doubt it is, It is good. In fact, you show real potential. I like your works. They are good. Nice use ...

It seems like it could go on forever. Not that that's a bad thing. Who knows? Maybe in some cases, eternal recurrence could be a good thing. I like the ...

This work is sad but true. This is an example of what the world has become and is becoming. Nice work. It got to me and not much does. You ...

Are you always egotistical or is this your first time? Anyways, it has nice words, a bit wierd though. Your work is kind of selfish a bit. I hope you ...

I like a type of futuristic type of story. But I think I heard that plot before...animals unable to live outside of a host. Oh well. It was a good ...

I liked your detail and some humor. But, and yes, there is always a but, you may have used too much detail. The common readers do not want to spend ...

sad, very sad. You have nice taste in usage. I like your style. I wouldn't read it everyday. Who knows? Maybe if you try hard enough, you may become the ...

I liked the last half. It was good. The use of realistic features is good for stories. this seems like a real/fiction story. Fun to read, it was. Keep writing.

A lot of questions, though they can be annoying at time, other times can add to the intrigue of the story. I red a poem once that was nothing, but ...

It was a good plot, but the use of copyrighted characters is plagerism and is illegal. I recomend you change the story a bit to make it your own.

I didn't read all of it, but I skimmed through it. It looks pretty good to me. I wish you luck in completing it. If you want to read a ...