teenweirdo

It comes from all around me, Swirling above my head. How do I want to feel? Which way should I turn? There, is that a ray of light... Or just ...

Welcome Kayla! I have the same problem with novels. I've started so many, but so far the only one I finished basically became a really long short story. That's why ...

Sing. Sing in praises of our wonderful Lord. Dance. Dance for the happiness of our lives. Cheer. Cheer for the knowledge of the world. Write. Write because if no one ...

I really like this poem. One thing that I noticed, though: I am trapped in the dark, the sun banned from my sight. Only you can provide light. Was this ...

Really funny! 8/10

Volcano

This is a pretty good poem. I also agree with what DrammaMomma says. Is there really a need to put two spaces after the commas like here: Look in the ...

Wow, I really like this, especially since you wrote it when you were so young. I like how the rhyming scheme is random, it adds to the mood of the ...

I really like this poem! It's great for a first one. All I have to say is that you should include more punctuation, especially periods so it's a little easier ...

Hello YWS! My name is Jamie and I'm fourteen years old. I guess I should tell you a little bit about myself. - I'm a freshman at my high school. ...

Hi Megan! My name's Jamie, and I'm fourteen, too. I hope you like it here! :D ~Jamie

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

My Sister's Keeper by Jodi Picoult. So far, it's amazing!

Her eyes wander, then lock onto his. Bright cheeks make them turn their heads, Trying to focus, trying to concentrate… Impossible. Such a great, deep emotion felt inside -- Is ...

These are all great poems! I actually think it would be a good idea if you added a few more stanzas to each of them, or broke them up into ...