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budding writer: Thanks so much for all the kind comments, much appreciated! Myles Wong: Wow, a lot of info here :) Thanks for pointing out the spelling mistakes; I've gone ...

Wow. This was... absolutely amazing. It really captures the darker side of a frightening reality well, but by binding it to something of a hook in that famous line from ...

A Brief Note: This was written way back in April of 2007 (so a little over a year ago) but I would still like some feedback on it in terms ...

Sohini: Thanks for leaving a comment! Yeah, I was a little worried about Krum acting a little OOC, but there's less to work with in terms of him. deafwriter_19: Thank ...

ambercoultis: Thank you :) melanie21: Thanks. Glad to have moved you slightly from your dislike of Krum ;) purple_star: Semi-colons are fun to play around with. The child was just ...

WriterAddict12356: If you're not sure what a songfic is, go google the definition. "Bad. Horrible..." is hardly considerable as a critique, and in no way can be construed as constructive ...

Aedomir: Thanks for pointing out the tense change, and for the compliments! :) Saint Razorblade: Yep, pretty new to YWS. Wow, I got you first fanfic crit here; I'm honoured; ...

Ooh, this is really nice! Good use of adjectives, good flow. I espeically like the last lines, how the world comes "alive in our eyes". Beautifully done.

That happens to me all the time! So I've got all these loose story beginnings lying around, some with complete plot lines planned out, that aren't finished. There isn't really ...

Note: This was actually written back in November/December of 2006, so it's been a while. However, concrit would still be appreciated. Life. This was the topic of the day, it ...

Overall, this is a really good poem; it conveys the concept rather well. Like Gadi ^^ said, try to avoid the more common cliches, as it sort of detracts from ...

Thanks for the warm welcome, everyone! I used to be geared towards fantasy in terms of reading and writing, but recently I've found myself leaning more towards sci fi than ...

Not much can be said of a crush that I have. It comes and it goes, but It should be known. Why is the "I" capitalized here? If it was ...

Wow, this is a very good prologue. It's good how you started it with a metaphor, espeically since it's an interesting one (Pain surged through my body like an angry ...

Degrassi is an awesome show! ^^I know, it's so sad, about JT's death. And just when he and Liberty were getting everything back out into the open and he was ...