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I liked it, I did but I have some questions. First, I get that Oliver and Luna slept together but the thing that confused me was whether or not it ...

At first, to be honest, I didn't get it. But then I kept reading. Although I normally don't like scattered works, this one worked very well. Schizophrenia changes a person's ...

Thank you for the review! It was really hard to keep ryhming, this is actualy the first peom I've written with a set ryhmne scheme so it was challenging. Thank ...

Here comes the Queen She smiles at her servants as she enters the scene They love her, and they all bow down To one whose face is only graced by ...

I liked it, it was simple and nice. I was sort of disappointed that there was no Jacob though! I love the energy Jacob adds to scenes with his humor. ...

I liked how simple it was. Many writers complicate and describe too much or twoo litte, myself included, but you made it just descripitive enough. It'll most defiantly stick with ...

LOOOOVEE IT! There's only a few things I'm wondering, one does Ely know about it or something? I didn't really understand the whole truck thing. Did Ely just see it ...

This is about a hard time I went through a while ago. This is one of the first times I've written about it and I'm eager to see how it ...

I know, the beginning is sort of confusing. He's like reliving it in his mind while he's trying to go to sleep. He's not saying he felt nothing while he ...

I liked it. Normally, I would say to elaborate but here I don't think it's needed. I think you made it short and sweet. I liked that part of it. ...

I don't understand what you were trying to say. Try fixing the structure to look like a poem, and being clearer. I really tried, I just don't get it. Sorry, ...

The way I saw it, it was a story of a girl who got kidnapped by a stalker. She tried to get away but he kept at it, torturing her ...

I liked it. It was very well written. However I don't understand what the monster is.

I loved it. I totally related to it. I don't really understand how you were also a hypocrite. Could you explain that? The other thing I wanted to say was ...

Thank you! I'll keep that in mind. Don't worry I am planning on explainning it in more detail later in the story. Thanks for the feedback:)