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For those people who are confused about the gender, it's a girl. Girls reassure each other about looks all the time. Anyway, I didn't really like it. It seemed rushed. ...

I liked it and I didn't like it. It's a love hate thing. I like your set up but I also don't like it. It's very nice. It's well written. ...

I love it. I love the meaning behind it. The imagdry was astonishing to say the least. I have never thought about it like that and now I'll probably rememeber ...

All and all, I really like the idea. Personifying depression the way you did is rarley done. It orignal, it's new, it's fresh, it's pretty genius. It was soooo refreshing ...

Thanks! This is actually the second chapter, I just messed up posting it. If you want to read the first one, go onto my portfolio and find three days in ...

May 20, 2009 Day 1 6:30 AM Zoey’s house My first thought was someone make it stop. My alarm blared. It was an awful, horrible even ringing sound that pierced ...

Okay, so here we go. Honesty, I was a tad bored. The concept has been done over and over. It's overused. You're writing is actually pretty good but I couldn't ...

I loved this poem. Normally when people refernece other sayings in poems; it bothers me because its not orignal. You, are an exception. You made it your own and explanded ...

This is the beginning of a novella I'm working on called 3 days in Hades. It's about a girl who is kidnapped by her ex boyfriend and his friend for ...

Very nice! I have never personally been addicted but I know addicts and yes this is close to their feelings.

I liked it very much. I am very patriotic, however you make some very good points. The thing I liked the most was how can we save others if we ...

Personally, I am a figure skater which makes me a lot more critical of it. The ideas are there, they're nice but where's the passion? As a skater, I've always ...

Okay. I can't think of much to critique actually. I liked the plot directoin, even though fantasy isn't normally my forte. But I do actually like it. There's just a ...

You wonder what happens after you die Do you go out with a bang? Or do you simply die? Do you cry and beg for more time? Or do you ...

It stuck with me, but I don't understand what's going on. My perception was that were displaying someone in a hospital (you talked about saline) who so depressed because of ...