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Banned for using the word 'fat' in the first place. [It's not very nice!]

Quote this. Because I'm goody-two-shoes. You get a dime. Prok gets no dime. This is my third attempt. Please, no one beat me to the punch this time. EDIT: Yay! ...

9/10. A definite.

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I must say this is very inventive. I think that the first image has more clarity, and is brighter and in more perspective than the second image. As for the ...

The mob soon leaves the outskirts of the town, and in the midst of the still "still" here is redundant raging crowd I can spot the younglings younglings? There's a ...

Ha ha ha... *laughter filled with mirth* That's classic... And, still, what do adults say to kids? "Look before you cross the road" As for the second one, it's inventive, ...

I like the first one, but I prefer a drawing that is quite clear, and not 'sketchy' with loadsa lines. One things I have to say: the second 'girl' is ...

I can see my daughter now, little more than a heap on the unforgiving stone floor. The sobs rack her body, as she struggles to maintain what she believes is ...

GAH! As said before, no-one (or only the strong-willed) will read this thoroughly. There's way too much Netspeak! And it's all down to the format of your posts, meaning novels ...

You know, it would be better to put this in another genre. You could classify this a slight, short biography, but (and don't take this the wrong way)... Netspeak may ...

Keep up the photography work, aestar 101!

I like the way you've arranged the objects - it's inventive and clever. Though already mentioned, why can't others see that the flower is clearly a tulip (or something in ...

You're writing a full-length novel, now are you? Well, good luck with that. I can't actually critique. I am a little confused, but since it's only part of the novel ...

Whoa. This is some remarkable stuff, CLARICE *evil laugh* Many people believed that it was homed to a monster. Shouldn't this be ..." home to a monster", hm? Yet again ...