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I really liked you story, it was very interesting and I just want to keep on reading .(luckily you have chapter 2 done.) it didn't have many errors and it ...

I liked the story, but you did stray off the subject a couple of times. But, the outline and subject was very good. i thought the albino vampire thing was ...

I thought it was great. it was easy to read and understand. The opening was very intriguing to me, but it really gets the reader interested, and makes it to ...