tay_star92

This review will be kind of short because... Well the story so far is kind of short. Here goes: Lightning streaked across the stormy sky. Airia sighed and turned restlessly ...

Hello, Correcting as I go along: Anything you have seen, I have seen a thousand times. I’ve seen everything, everyone. I make friends then watch them leave. I’ve fallen in ...

ILL CORRECT AS I GO ALONG::; It has been a year and three months since the Election of 2096, which arguably was the worst event in America's history since the ...

tHIS STORY WAS EXTREMELY INTERESTING TO READ aLTHOUGH I HAVE NO CLUE WHAT'S GOING ON (HA HA HA) I AGREE WITH THE OTHER POSTS IT DOES SOUND LIKE ITS TALKING ...

I R3ALLY ENJOYED THE STORY... THERE IS GREAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT IN THIS SHORT SECTION i FEEL LIKE I CAN ALREADY RELATE TO THE CHARACTERS.. WILL THE BOY WHO LIKES THE ...

Ok i'll correct as I go along!! They were walking together in a group, a loud, boisterous group. They looked around to find there their victim and found it. The ...

i LOVED iT!!! i WAS CAPTIVATED FROM THE FIRST PARAGRAPH... BE A LITTLE MORE DESCRIPTIVE OR YES IT CAN GET CONFUSING THE STORY LINE WAS MOVING ALONG WELL AND IT ...

OK SO I LIKED THE WAY YOU STARTED IT CAPTURED MY ATTENTION YOU DO HAVE A COUPLE GRAMMATICAL ERRORS:: ...bit warmer, but the warmness didn’t come. yOU PROBABLY MEANT TO ...

I liked it>>> The story was different and not something you would see everyday. Yes there was some info-dumping but it didn't weigh the prologue down that much. The intro ...