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  • Other » General, Other
    Re: Love Is Love

    This is gem leaving a review! This definitely hit really hard as I am also asexual, and I really agree entirely with the opinions stated in this work! Platonic love ...

    Mar 26, 2023

  • Short Story » Supernatural, Fantasy
    Re: The Playground:Part Two

    Hello this is gem leaving a review!! This definitely had a lot of plot progression! You broke it up into really short acts -> In my other reviews I mentioned ...

    Mar 26, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical
    Re: Cathedral Spire

    This is gem writing you a review! This piece is very thought provoking it is also very structured and full of images that seem to also be metaphors! I definitely ...

    Mar 26, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, Fantasy
    Re: 'I have been to a place'

    This is gem hoping in for a review before all the slots are taken! Oh, my goodness this piece is beautiful! I came because I liked the name, I stayed ...

    Mar 26, 2023

  • Other » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Re: Anne alone

    Hello Vampricone! It's gem here leaving you yet another review Haha! This piece says a lot without dialogue! And usually, at least with the works of yours I have read ...

    Mar 26, 2023

  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Other
    Re: What is an AL?

    Hello Lexus! It's gem here leaving you a review! This work was very intriguing and sort of vague! I read it with an intention to figure out what an AL ...

    Mar 26, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Re: The adventures of Poppy Verosisca-Seven

    This is gem leaving a review for you again Vampricone! I really like this piece; it is really well thought out. The dialogue feels very real, and the characters actions ...

    Mar 26, 2023

  • Hello Vampricone this is gem here leaving a review! You write like a true script writer, with an emphasis on dialogue and its meaning. However, I think that if you ...

    Mar 26, 2023

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative
    Re: A Kid

    Hello this is gem! The title was very direct and succinct as was the poem. You really show the readers what it is like to be a kid. It's hard ...

    Mar 21, 2023

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Horror
    Re: Raguel

    Hello this is gem hopping in with a review! Lovely horror fiction here! What caught my eye when reading this was definitely the jarring anger! Starting a short story with ...

    Feb 13, 2023

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: Love Letter to Prozac

    Hello this is gem greeting you with a review! Well after reading this I too am thankful for Prozac. The speaker had a lot happening in their early life and ...

    Feb 12, 2023

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: autumn

    This is gem hopping in for a review. You must have a wonderful friend! This poem is very interesting and your friend sounds very chaotic. I thought it was very ...

    Feb 12, 2023

  • Other » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Re: 31 horrendous Halloween tales

    Hello its gem! I noticed this has been in the green room for a while! I might as well give you the second review! I hope I cover that you ...

    Jan 28, 2023

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: White Cop (sonnet)

    Hi this is gem writing his review. I am rusty so take it easy on me XD! This was an interesting piece. It speaks about police brutality and how everything ...

    Oct 5, 2022

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Fantasy
    Re: passed away

    Hey this is gem writing his review! I am rusty so take it easy on me XD. I love this poem it took me a while to figure out the ...

    Oct 5, 2022

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