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  • Romantic Short Stories Re: You make me feel

    *sigh* Here goes nothing . I woke up around six this morning . How ? hmm lets see, my step mom was screaming at the top of her lungs 'Hazel ...

    Dec 5, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: You make me feel

    *sigh* Here goes nothing . I woke up around six this morning . How? hmm lets see, my step mom was screaming at the top of her lungs 'Hazel come ...

    Dec 5, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Happy Unhappy Ending: Chapter 6

    1. how come Tony's chapters are so small 2. It's Tony's chapters that make me want to read 3. I take back my comment in fifth chapter about the meg ...

    Dec 2, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Happy Unhappy Ending: Chapter 5

    Till now it's all about drugs and sex and yeah that's pretty much it , see there has to be something in the book your writing that will make it ...

    Dec 2, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Happy Unhappy Ending: Chapter 4

    I found this chapter kind of okay . There are a few typing error's , nothing major , but once your done writing your work review it just once . ...

    Dec 2, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Happy Unhappy Ending: Chapter 1

    I've reviewed your picture first, of Joy and Tony , so now I cant wait to read and find out what happens between her and Tony !!! really good !!!!!!

    Dec 1, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Tony and Joy

    Uh , I haven't read your novel but I will read it as soon as possible , anyways , Tony looks kind of creepy , like a creepy mannequin while ...

    Dec 1, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: As I Sat Sadly By Her Side.

    First of all , it was really good , it kept me hooked on , but at places my attention would get diverted , and I really like this line ...

    Dec 1, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Friends have become b****es, very lame funny , and serious!!

    Friends have become bitches, very lame funny , and serious!! Friends act like bitches , I try to ditch them , but they keep coming like a bad itch . ...

    Nov 28, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: An Ugly Girl

    Amazing ! and yes I know i'm under the age limit ! :P ! I found it really really good , It kept me hooked on through out but I ...

    Nov 27, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: New (I'm still working on the title)

    Oh ! and welcome to YWS ! An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind - Gandhi Ji

    Nov 27, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: New (I'm still working on the title)

    I'm really sorry but why were they called to auditorium and not to the principal's office , according to me it would make more sense to call them to principle's ...

    Nov 27, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Talking to the Moon

    I just found one thing wrong , it was that Alicia could hear her grandfathers voice when she was a kid right ? then how come after 67 years , ...

    Nov 25, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Alessandra

    its my first time writing something, please give me your comments !!! . Here goes nothing : Her hands were chained at her side , an iron chain was tied ...

    Nov 25, 2011


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