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Re: You make me feel
*sigh* Here goes nothing . I woke up around six this morning . How ? hmm lets see, my step mom was screaming at the top of her lungs 'Hazel ...
Dec 5, 2011 -
Re: You make me feel
*sigh* Here goes nothing . I woke up around six this morning . How? hmm lets see, my step mom was screaming at the top of her lungs 'Hazel come ...
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Re: Happy Unhappy Ending: Chapter 6
1. how come Tony's chapters are so small 2. It's Tony's chapters that make me want to read 3. I take back my comment in fifth chapter about the meg ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Happy Unhappy Ending: Chapter 5
Till now it's all about drugs and sex and yeah that's pretty much it , see there has to be something in the book your writing that will make it ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Happy Unhappy Ending: Chapter 4
I found this chapter kind of okay . There are a few typing error's , nothing major , but once your done writing your work review it just once . ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Happy Unhappy Ending: Chapter 1
I've reviewed your picture first, of Joy and Tony , so now I cant wait to read and find out what happens between her and Tony !!! really good !!!!!!
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: Tony and Joy
Uh , I haven't read your novel but I will read it as soon as possible , anyways , Tony looks kind of creepy , like a creepy mannequin while ...
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: As I Sat Sadly By Her Side.
First of all , it was really good , it kept me hooked on , but at places my attention would get diverted , and I really like this line ...
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: Friends have become b****es, very lame funny , and serious!!
Friends have become bitches, very lame funny , and serious!! Friends act like bitches , I try to ditch them , but they keep coming like a bad itch . ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: An Ugly Girl
Amazing ! and yes I know i'm under the age limit ! :P ! I found it really really good , It kept me hooked on through out but I ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: New (I'm still working on the title)
Oh ! and welcome to YWS ! An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind - Gandhi Ji
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: New (I'm still working on the title)
I'm really sorry but why were they called to auditorium and not to the principal's office , according to me it would make more sense to call them to principle's ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Talking to the Moon
I just found one thing wrong , it was that Alicia could hear her grandfathers voice when she was a kid right ? then how come after 67 years , ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: Alessandra
its my first time writing something, please give me your comments !!! . Here goes nothing : Her hands were chained at her side , an iron chain was tied ...
Nov 25, 2011
