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Hi! please review my work! really need it ! Here it is : Thank-you !

can you please review my work ! Its : Thanks so much !!! :D

I'm really sorry, but the effect of your photo isn't really that good. It isn't very attractive, in any way. The angles aren't new, it look's like something you've gotten ...

First time writing a touchy poem, go a bit easy on me He Picked me when I dropped low. He mopped my tears, made me laugh. He laid a soft ...

I had read your "un-revised" version. I liked that but this I............................... I love it !. I really like the last line "I knew you didn't want to be alone." ...

Hi ! I don't know whether or not you got your idea from this movie "Domino" or not but some aspects where just like how they were in the movie, ...

dude !!!!!! I am so !!!! eeeep !!!! I love one direction !!! Hmm my band member's going to be Alessandra Blackfeather . Likes : Well she loves doing new ...

I really liked your story, I think I've read a story somewhat based on this. Your formatting chipped off the effect of story. The space that you left didn't so ...

Hi Robythegerm , I'll be reviewing your work today and yeah here goes . 1) In the line "He was actually knowing everything" yeah Knowing is a grammatical error it ...

I found this really interesting . I'm guessing you watch a lot of murder and mystery programs ? . It sounded like something that would happen in this show "Castle" ...

Dude,I kind of know what you mean. Sometimes my mom compares me to my friends and even I get's irritating,knowing someone is going to point a finger and say something ...

If I ever , ever , ever , ever ,ever ever , ever , ever , ever ,ever ever , ever , ever , ever ,ever ever , ever , ...

Hey , I found a few mistakes first in your writing so here goes nothing ! In the line even the stream spoke louder than he , It would make ...

uh welcome to YWS first of all ! Of deepening desires Of growing growls Of insatiable hunger This part kinda reminded me of food for some reason even though I ...

The last line an error's there its "Shut the hell up" I screamed with excitement .