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Re: Kit's House of Pain
Hi! please review my work! really need it ! Here it is : Thank-you !
Feb 10, 2012 -
Re: I will review (almost) anything
can you please review my work ! Its : Thanks so much !!! :D
Feb 10, 2012 -
Re: A graveyard's colours
I'm really sorry, but the effect of your photo isn't really that good. It isn't very attractive, in any way. The angles aren't new, it look's like something you've gotten ...
Feb 10, 2012 -
Re: To him .
First time writing a touchy poem, go a bit easy on me He Picked me when I dropped low. He mopped my tears, made me laugh. He laid a soft ...
Jan 26, 2012 -
Re: Maia (REVISED!!)
I had read your "un-revised" version. I liked that but this I............................... I love it !. I really like the last line "I knew you didn't want to be alone." ...
Jan 26, 2012 -
Re: Born To Die
Hi ! I don't know whether or not you got your idea from this movie "Domino" or not but some aspects where just like how they were in the movie, ...
Jan 20, 2012 -
Re: One Direction Storybook
dude !!!!!! I am so !!!! eeeep !!!! I love one direction !!! Hmm my band member's going to be Alessandra Blackfeather . Likes : Well she loves doing new ...
Jan 14, 2012 -
Re: Prisoner
I really liked your story, I think I've read a story somewhat based on this. Your formatting chipped off the effect of story. The space that you left didn't so ...
Jan 13, 2012 -
Re: The Chapel
Hi Robythegerm , I'll be reviewing your work today and yeah here goes . 1) In the line "He was actually knowing everything" yeah Knowing is a grammatical error it ...
Jan 12, 2012 -
Re: Twenty Questions
I found this really interesting . I'm guessing you watch a lot of murder and mystery programs ? . It sounded like something that would happen in this show "Castle" ...
Jan 10, 2012 -
Re: Letting off steam...
Dude,I kind of know what you mean. Sometimes my mom compares me to my friends and even I get's irritating,knowing someone is going to point a finger and say something ...
Jan 10, 2012 -
Re: It's Not His Kiss [Edited]
If I ever , ever , ever , ever ,ever ever , ever , ever , ever ,ever ever , ever , ever , ever ,ever ever , ever , ...
Dec 17, 2011 -
Re: Truth
Hey , I found a few mistakes first in your writing so here goes nothing ! In the line even the stream spoke louder than he , It would make ...
Dec 17, 2011 -
Re: Flowing Desire
uh welcome to YWS first of all ! Of deepening desires Of growing growls Of insatiable hunger This part kinda reminded me of food for some reason even though I ...
Dec 11, 2011 -
Re: You make me feel
The last line an error's there its "Shut the hell up" I screamed with excitement .
Dec 5, 2011