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Re: A Sonnet To War
Its pretty good but I would suggest improvising the language a bit the concept is as I must admit brilliant though here again I would also like to say that ...
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Re: Alone
Okay I would frankly suggest revising and re-revising it cause that helps a lot . Also I think being slightly more emphatic towards feelings and urges could prove to be ...
May 16, 2015
