tamtam97

It's just you and me and there's no one around Feel like I'm hanging by a thread,And it's a long way down I've been trying to breath but I'm fighting ...

I was sitting at home Searching on Google I was typing and All that I could think of was Who would I be If I wasn't me I'de be a ...

Actually not perfect but good for a start......Keep working!

that was gr8....i'de give that 9/10!!!

A voice in the back,the lies and the fears No colour but black,the truth disappears Just by the look in your eyes I can tell That your honor is gone ...

Don't know,don't care,don't count on me A phrase I hear everyday I guess it's so easy to say Don't know,don't care,don't count on me Don't know.don't care,don't count on me ...

punctuation and everything isn't a big deal right now....cause u have a wonderful ,fantastic choice of words!!!the song has a deep meaning and i am sure that it could be ...

I adore it...its fantastic!

gr8 organization and wonderful choice of words....but there is a little thing that i have to say!!!The story you're telling isn't appealing that much,,,and also the song tittle ain't that....just ...

its has a special meaning although its a comon category or theme!

from my point of view that was good ,not perfect,but good!....there are some mistakes that u could easily edit so try just a little bit harder!

The dream that is feared The hope that is put In somebody that regrets Regrets the papers that he teared Regrets the truth that he denied The path that led ...

I loved it so much it's wonderful i really think that you could be a very creative auther

i really love you're poem its so wonderful and I actually couldn't find anything wrong to be corrected.

it was really great I think That if you just fixed some very little things you're poems would be totally amazing.I also like the way of expresing what you mean.