tamtam97

verall I thought this was pretty good, so here's just a couple of things: The first thing is that the first verse, every line starts with "This is goodbye to..." ...

verall I thought this was pretty good, so here's just a couple of things: The first thing is that the first verse, every line starts with "This is goodbye to..." ...

Re: Acting Like I Don't Care New postby keekers11 on Tue Aug 30, 2011 5:21 am Very nice lyrics! I can really relate to this because I act like I ...

Re: To everyone like me. New postby Bhayden71297 on Wed Aug 31, 2011 6:50 am Hey- Wow. W.O.W.That's all I have to say. Just...wow. I don't even know if there's ...

Re: Heart Slap New postby Rock n' Roll Queen on Wed Aug 31, 2011 6:08 pm This is an amazing poem that I really connected to & I know other's ...

"t's a bit short and it would of been easier to read if it was broken into paragraphs. I couldn't get a feel of the song so it might be ...

Um, hmm... The idea of the song is interesting and a good message. But the lyrics I'm not too sure of. There's no rhyming scheme for the song and I ...

Re: My Day in the Sun New postby LiesOnLies on Fri Sep 02, 2011 9:46 am The Lyrics I thought this was a very wonderful positive song. However, one thing ...

That was nice......like really really really Really really really reaaaaalllyyy nice! You did a good job with this one. But actually, it may be improved! It's really good, but it ...

That was actually great! Awesome in fact! I enjoyed reading the words.....You form a verse really well. Good job!

I actually feel like you're repeating yourself every now and then! The idea is really creative and nice....But you're order of words should be fixed!

You're really talented....Your usage of words is really good! While I was reading it I felt that there's a beat within the words. I just wanted to give u some ...

you're really good :)

that would make a pretty song

I really like it ;)