taliarose

Death is looking for me Somehow I manage To avoid being found But that doesn't seem to last He searches underground Up and down He has almost found me Many ...

Thank you all for your reviews! This is actually based on an experience that I had about a year ago.

The room was filled to the ceiling When there wasn't a person there There was a stereo It seemed uncanny The magic that happened We had never met, nor spoke ...

The first line of each stanza were very good. The repetition added to the poem. I love your comparison between man and puppet. I think it does say quite a ...

Very cutesie, but still very good. The sentence you used at the beginning was a perfect hook to the story. I really like how it is pretty short and to ...

Very cutesie, but still very good. The sentence you used at the beginning was a perfect hook to the story. I really like how it is pretty short and to ...

Great poem! I loved your storyline. It isn't easy to make a poem into a story, but this is a very good example of one. You do have punctuation and ...

I wouldn't guess that you are no poet because this is really good! The words are very powerful and they actually make complete sense to me. I think you should ...

Thanks!

I clicked on this at first just because I LOVE one word titles. I though that this piece was really well written. Your use of description is great. You do ...

hey everyone! So I just joined a few days ago. I have replied to a few works, but havent gotten any points for it. I also can't find where it ...

It's funny how some can be loud and some soft. Some are even prettier than others. Deep voices don't have to belong to men. High voices don't have to belong ...

I am so glad I found a post that speaks the truth. Not that other posts don't, but what I admire is your openness and how you put these words ...

The personification that you used is what really made this great. I loved it!

This was great! I love the descriptive langauge and the way it is vauge but in a good way!