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Re: Chapter One
Wow, that was a really powerful first chapter! Most of your story has been nitpicked except for it's comple x ion not comple c ion. I also really like the ...
Sep 5, 2009
Wow, that was a really powerful first chapter! Most of your story has been nitpicked except for it's comple x ion not comple c ion. I also really like the ...
Sep 5, 2009