taimur

you start off really well...i liked the attention you paid to every detail in the first paragraph.....i will let you know some of the lines which were masterful and should ...

your first stanza is quite apparently describes the physical attributes of the subject...however, the third stanza and more specifically, the last three lines, do not amke any sense in the ...

Both Aristotle and Plato have taken an utopist totalitarian society as a foundation-stone in their political discourse. However, there are some major differences as well as some similarities in the ...

well, the idea began well but it could have been further developed and emphasized....apart from the grammatical errors which were not serious in the first place, develop ur story line...sentences ...

that was cool...uyou started off really well and the manner in which you began, it feels like the author can relate to his subject... though, the ending could have been ...

apart from some of the mistakes you made with regards to grammar and syntax, i think the idea behind it is original...keep writing and always review your work twice....once read ...

the melody part was like its thing that is precious and that is original from man's age of innocence......and it has magical powers but i all comes wid a sacrifice....

i dont know either about the book nor abt the tragedy....but nice the way u explained the space of last few sentences...howevr, do concontrate on ur spellings n ur tenses...improve ...

hello, ma name is taimur...i am 22 n am a student at LUMS,Pakistan's most prestigious university...i love to read....n i haf read loads from chomsky to ghazali to tolkein to ...

The Piper of Palestine… My name is Hamza ibn-e-Saleh and I was born on the eighth of Rajab in the year 1397 A.H. I was the only child from my ...