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Re: The Cataclysm Chronicles: Prologue The Fourth
omgg you are a complete inspiration to me ! Your work is really, really good (: So much tension plus the wars going on. Unlike anything I've ever read or ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Artecila - Prologue
hey yeah i really like this piece ! i feel bad for the secretary lol thank goodness she's no Mary Sue lmao we get enough of those in the Twi ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: Delusion
hey i never read a zombie story before (: few gramatical errors and spelling erorrs, but were all human (: i rly hope you continue this piece because you totally ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Cat Steps (draft)
hey your stories are great (: your a very good novelist and I hope to see this book in book stores =] you are a very good writer-- lots of ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Blood chapt.1
hey your story is rly good and you have a way with words ! a few spelling and gramatical errors but other than that, man, you are GREAT ! Keep ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: The Gem of the Magi - Prologue and Chapter One
hey i really liked it ! I'm not usually big on the whole Magi and Mage thing stories, but you drew me in. The beginning was confusing as heck, but ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: The UnBible: The Old Testament: The Book of Genesis
hee hee ! (: very good, gurlieeee ! I lovedd it you are an amazingg writerrrr it made me smile and giggle and laugh. I'm a Christian, so it was ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: The Effect
First of all, very good piece over all. A few grammer mistakes and a fw spelling mistakes but other than that, you have a plot (: Very good. I was ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: Liar Liar (1)
Very good- very sarcastic. Made me feel like I was in a teen movie ! (: It's a break from all the supernatural B.S- Twilight ugh- thats clouding up the ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Vengeance (chapter one)
Really good ! Immediately hooked me from the beginning. First sentence kicks major butt- hence, yet again, why it hooked me in =] Loved it from the first sentence. What ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Broken Spirits
I REALLY liked it. Kind of vague but it immediately hooked me in. Honestly, at first, I thought this was a dream. I thought the girl was going to be ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Darkness of The Heart
I really like the beginning- it works well with what your writing! Keep up the good work and it started off really good. Not so suspenseful, but it was good ...
Apr 1, 2011
