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Re: Grief in a New Era
I actually love this. The narrator is great and the contrast between their narration and the world they're living in is really entertaining. I especially love their melodramatic tone (it ...
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Re: Aroma of Yesterday
Thank you for the kind words. Im surprised and glad that something I wrote had an impact on you. Go and make those memories, I am sure your dad will ...
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Re: Aroma of Yesterday
Thank you so much :) Hearing that you liked it is really encouraging for me. I often find it hard to tell whether what I%u2019m thinking while writing is actually ...
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Re: A Breath in Four Parts
Thank you for the review, and for introducing me to the S%u2019more method! I%u2019m glad you enjoyed the poem. You said that you couldn%u2019t quite connect them all to one ...
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Re: A Breath in Four Parts
Thank you for the review! I%u2019m glad you enjoyed the poem(s?); I spent a lot of time on the imagery. I agree that it does feel somewhat disconnected, especially the ...
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Re: A Breath in Four Parts
welp i accidentally commented
Jun 4, 2025
