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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Grief in a New Era

    I actually love this. The narrator is great and the contrast between their narration and the world they're living in is really entertaining. I especially love their melodramatic tone (it ...

    Nov 5, 2025
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Aroma of Yesterday

    Thank you for the kind words. Im surprised and glad that something I wrote had an impact on you. Go and make those memories, I am sure your dad will ...

    Oct 30, 2025
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Aroma of Yesterday

    Thank you so much :) Hearing that you liked it is really encouraging for me. I often find it hard to tell whether what I%u2019m thinking while writing is actually ...

    Oct 30, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: A Breath in Four Parts

    Thank you for the review, and for introducing me to the S%u2019more method! I%u2019m glad you enjoyed the poem. You said that you couldn%u2019t quite connect them all to one ...

    Jun 5, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: A Breath in Four Parts

    Thank you for the review! I%u2019m glad you enjoyed the poem(s?); I spent a lot of time on the imagery. I agree that it does feel somewhat disconnected, especially the ...

    Jun 5, 2025
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: A Breath in Four Parts

    welp i accidentally commented

    Jun 4, 2025


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