sylrie

To clear things up: "Jabber mock" is meant to be a play on words; the Jabberwock had been using the protagonist's father's voice to mock him, and since Jabberwock and ...

Thank you ^^

A lot of people have been pointing out the ambiguity, and with mixed feelings concerning said ambiguity, so it's something that I'll be paying attention to in the future (the ...

Thank you ^-^

Thank you for the compliments! I do have other poems of varying quality and subject matter, and this was a rewrite of a poem I posted here a while ago. ...

Personally, that was not my thought process while writing this (I'm not religious myself) but if that is what you thought while reading this, then it is a legitimate interpretation ...

I mostly based the Keeper off of myself, because I not only have a lot of my own secrets, but many have trusted me enough to share their own with ...

I will admit I went for a more simplistic style of poem, which is why I accepted defeat on a few of the lines and why it seems oddly cheery ...

Thanks for the review! alliyah also commented on the use of martyr, and in hindsight perhaps corpse would serve better, as it is both the name of the poem and ...

All noted. I didn't realize the potency of the word martyr (I believed it to be someone who died for any cause; did not realize it had a religious context) ...

XP I was really because I saw someone in one of its other chapters review the deleted text and so I thought everybody was reviewing the deleted text as though ...

I'm so confused all I see is [DELETED] but people are putting down actual reviews and help O-O

Thank you!

You're actually right on the semicolons. The moment I learned to use them I started using them a lot to practice, before promptly using them incorrectly (or too frequently). As ...

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I do apologize for the duplicate: I have edited it with this following message, as I don't want to spam the comments with the same review. You're doing great! Keep ...