syd552

this is really good oh your 13!! me too lol sorry so anyway, i like this poem but its a little short i think you should add more it really ...

i cant rreally construct very much cause this was really good but at the end you should add 2 more lines to go along with the rythm of the poem ...

I think that you should retitle this, surviving middle school. Because your 11 and in middle school, like me and this sounds more like something that would happen in middle ...