swissgirl

Not bad, I think you describe the feelings someone has before something ends and something new starts pretty good. I remember Ffeeling like that too when high school was over. ...

I really like the beginning, but towards the end the rhythm doesn't work anymore. I really like the content, though. Good Job. But overall, it's not bad, and don't forget: ...

Hey, thanks for your review! I know the whole scene is a little out of context, which probably has to do with the fact that it's not the beginning of ...