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Re: Hiya!
Hi! I'm sweetie_pie94! I'm a very nice person. I live in the country in a small town. I love photography, writing, and drawing. Read my blog to get inside my ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: life and mistakes.........
Hiya!:) I'm gonna help you here. I realized that your new. I'm too at the time. One thing I know about poems is that you need to capitalize each line. ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: life and mistakes.........
Hya!:) I'm gonna help you here. I realized that your new. I'm too at the time. One thing I know about poems is that you need to capitalize each line. ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: life and mistakes.........
Hya!:) I'm gonna help you here. I realized that your new. I'm too at the time. One thing I know about poems is that you need to capitalize each line. ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: End Game
Hiya! I'm gonna help you here. I see one problem and I have one suggestion. One thing I know about poems is that your supposed to capitalize at the beginning ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: End Game
Hiya! I'm gonna help you here. I see one problem and I have one suggestion. One thing I know about poems is that your supposed to capitalize at the beginning ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: The mountain's song
Hiya! I'm gonna help you here today. Honestly, I love your poem. It is so extraordinary. I've never heard a poem about such a thing. But people say 'The Mountain ...
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Little Fortune (description)
Thanks fox. It's a big help. I'm a beginner. :)
Jul 16, 2009 -
Re: Maiko of Gion
Hey Fox! I really like this story! It's breath taking. Your so good at writing. I wish I have your skills. I was not expecting the end. Which that is ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: Little Fortune (description)
LITTLE FORTUNE :intro: 20 year old Destiny Bryant, goes to the far tip of Florida with her 25 year old fiancée, Tommy Black, to live there and have their wedding. ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: Beach Photos!
Wow! Those are so beautiful! You know how to do that right! Great job! Keep going!
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: an anime drawing
Wow, Lily! That is the greatest picture I've ever seen! I love it. I draw A LOT but I don't draw like you... Perfect. Do you have more art work, ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: Icecreams
Hiya there!!!!!!!!! I love this poem! It's so adorable! At that age it was pretty good. Since, you were writing then, I can already see your master pieces being quoted ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: Your eyes
Hiya there! I'm gonna help ya today! I looked into your eyes, And the world seemed to swirl, The beauty in them was immense, And they appeared so intense. In ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: The Tree
I have two things to tell you to improve this poem.:) I'm here to help. One of things I know about poems is that your supposed to capitalize each new ...
Jul 15, 2009
