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sweetcapris

  • Other Poetry Re: Black Cloud

    I liked the bit about "that would bring me down, but I'm already there" The dark cloud image fits pretty well. I feel like the beginning is a little too ...

    Apr 26, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Running the Race

    As tattered Nikes slam against the track with well thought, fast, and unforgiving stride I race to shake the target from my back the pace assured to leave the pack ...

    Apr 26, 2008


Depression is messin with the wrong person over here cuz in the months that I was doing better I was sharpening my weapons for this war.
— Kaia