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sweetcapris

  • Other Poetry Re: Black Cloud

    I liked the bit about "that would bring me down, but I'm already there" The dark cloud image fits pretty well. I feel like the beginning is a little too ...

    Apr 26, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Running the Race

    As tattered Nikes slam against the track with well thought, fast, and unforgiving stride I race to shake the target from my back the pace assured to leave the pack ...

    Apr 26, 2008


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