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Not too bad, I do have a bit of a pet peeve with one thing. In the opening sentence, you quoted Nicole as being born without parents: Once, there was ...

She could hear a faint beeping noise that sounded like it was whispering to her from the kitchen. The beeping got louder as she past her father’s open bedroom door. ...

I'm not all that sure how I feel about this. It felt a little "school child," to me. As was previously mentioned, it was quite repetitive, and I found myself ...

Discrimination. Why can’t you understand that we most live hand in hand? Why is it that you hate? How does that do any good to our fate? Why must there ...

I did like this, it's pretty good, it flows well & it's nice to read. I just have a couple things - for starters, I'm not entirely sure what the ...

Thank you guys! Not really American Idol, just Carrie. I sort of think the show itself has gone downhill since it's early days, but meh maybe that's just me. I ...

thanks very much :) and yay, carrie is love.

Thanks guys. And yeah, Thunder Dude, that is Carrie Underwood, you win a million dollars for guessing right. =D Anyway, I'm glad I'm not alone in my darkness, for I ...

Hi! My name is Hilary. I'm seventeen & I enjoy writing young adult fiction. Lets see...I'm really into animal rights, and I work at a convenience store, which I hate. ...