sunwater

update please so we know what is taken. Name: Alen Hayward District Number: 8 Which one: Tribute Age:16 Appearance: he is a 5' 7" and has a light tan his ...

“Alexei!!! stop pulling the poor girls legs you only just met her… come to think of it you haven’t met her at all!!” a girl of about 18 years old ...

. good job

Pulling my little black car into Charlie's driveway, I saw that only Bella was home, the obscure police car that Charlie insisted on driving everywhere not in its usual spot. ...

i love it its better then the twilight book. this is so more intesting then watching a girl with depresion problems lol

I like this I did'nt find anything wrong but thats me im more on a spelling person not a looking at things like " ;< ,, thats is not my ...

Ok i will do that next time but that was a test run. I was thinking that in the first chapter I wanted to leave readers wanting to want to ...

this is very good I like your main person in the story and how bad she is at flirting. But I was wanting the last sentence at least plz.

this is a interesting thing you are doing but im thinking there in a park

is there going to be a flash back on some battles and when she said magic she is saying she can use it right.

i love this but is this the start because if it is i would just like to see more of what the character looks like. but i like how theres ...

well i just looved this story you did i really got into what you where talking about and what was happening. but i would like to know more about what ...

I wake up to the sunny outside shining in but the frost still on the window so I roll over and look at the clock 7:50am. Thinking what am I ...