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Name: Zanea [I use her for all of my SBs so please don't steal!] Age: 17 Gender: Female Species: Human, but has a trace of elf. Appearance: Tall and skinny, ...

Sleeping! The perfect time to use my powers... cackles evilly. Zanea Zanea layed on her side, watching the sleeping group. For now, they would be all the protection she needed. ...

Zanea She felt a vindictive pleasure at that- so she wasn't losing her skills after all. They really had been trying to kill the prince. And if the Emperess's son ...

Yay! It took me forever to figure out how to enter her in. You should be happy for me. ;) Zanea Zanea ran, feeling her heart pounding through her chest ...

Character Profile: Name: Zanea Gender: female Age (5-18): 16, almost 17. Personality: Quiet, strong-willed. Very stubborn and hates giving into someone else's orders, which makes her generally unlikab

First of all, I loved it. Emotion rolled through the entire piece. I could feel her heart breaking in a sense... wow, it was really good. Now down to the ...

Great prologue! I really enjoyed reading it, just like all your other writings. ;) Just a few things I should probably mention since last time I got told off because ...

The plot was confusing several people, so just to make things clear- he left her because he didn't think he was good enough, but she thinks he left her because ...

I was checking the archives and found this little bugger. O.o it's not very well written at all but there's really nothing I'm going to do about that unless I ...

That is so good. You are a true-born author. Just reading this makes me think of three words: Proffessional You Rock Very nicely done. :D Impressive.

Thanks everyone! Case closed ^^ thank you so much for your input and I'm going to use all the ideas I got. Thank you!

Trayon of The Dymenshon Series Oh, crap. Not again. So, you're saying before I lost my memory... I had a kid. And if I'm seventeen... why the heck is that ...

[never done this be4- darn, I'm not looking forward to messing up. :P] Ash walks into the bar. She was told to meet him here if they ever got seperated. ...

Thanks so much I was about to ask this question! :) I'm adding a romantic subplot in my book between two characters and I didn't know how to make them ...

He heard a quiet sound from the bedroom. It was the sound of choking mixed with falling tears- a young girl was crying. :D