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Kale "Okay, Selene, we've got to stop this bleeding," I said quickly. "Give me your shirt," I commanded Tarrion. He didn't understand why but obeyed in a heartbeat. I ripped ...

Aris "C'mon!" I said as quietly as I could. I didn't know if they knew we were here. "We need to hide, it's no use running, sounds like they have ...

Gabe "Not all Fey are bad," I said. "Most are annoying, all can be difficult to ignore, but not all Fey are bad." Selene didn't seem to agree. "Not all," ...

Gabe "Whatever works," I said. "I'm good with anything."

Zanea I heard the little girl sniff. "I'm Ginny, and I don't know where they are," she said quietly. "Well, we can't just abandon her. We can keep her with ...

Claudia I rapped on the door of the humans house. Three of them in there could see us, and I looked perfectly normal. They say curiousity killed the cat. They're... ...

Aris I felt stupid. Like really, really stupid. Like, so stupid that I can hardly hold in my stupidity. Everyone knew. Just like with Tarrion, everyone friggin' knew. And although ...

Kale Mornonic, hairbrained, oh yes, these people had a high opinion of me. I walked off, sat down, and began to try to get to sleep. Huh. Like that'd ever ...

Character: Fey Name: Claudia Age: (15-18) 17 Appearance: She likes to take on a human form of an asian girl with long sweeping black hair but in her real form ...

Gabe We reached the house and went inside. Some Fey stood outside, but they made no move to go in. "Hey, thanks," I said to Lillian. "You're a lifesaver." "It's ...

Actually, teh reason they're cliche? Because they're what everyone has in real life and make it more realistic.

Kale I quickly stood up and went to Selene. "Yeah, that's not good," I said. "Ah, frig, why can't my father be here?! If only Tarrion had thought to bring ...

Aris "Eavesdropping?!" You have got to be kidding me. I didn't need more people on my back. Tigger smirked. "Yep," he said, shrugging. "Looked interesting to me." I tried not ...

Overall, very interesting. Just a few capatilization problems that drove me nuts while reading it. If I capatilized something for you, I'll put it in italics. I force open my ...

A flaw? I always use maybe one of these: Clumsy, Too Easily Convinced, To Mistrusting, Bad at Keeping Secrets, Trusts people to Easily, etc.