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  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: What's Wrong?

    wow this is absolutely amazing!!!!!!!! you should make it into a book because it is so freaking good. I wonder if you could have made it a little more suspenseful ...

    Mar 15, 2016
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: Three Years : By Olivia Sozio

    i like your character and your story is very interesting but i wonder if you could have some more detail and i am also confused about what your focus area ...

    Mar 15, 2016
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Lost Girl

    this story is soooo good and i love the journey that ling goes on your historical facts really help explain buddhism i like your characters a lot and bijong especially

    Mar 15, 2016


When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself.
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