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  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: What's Wrong?

    wow this is absolutely amazing!!!!!!!! you should make it into a book because it is so freaking good. I wonder if you could have made it a little more suspenseful ...

    Tue Mar 15, 2016 10:09 pm
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: Three Years : By Olivia Sozio

    i like your character and your story is very interesting but i wonder if you could have some more detail and i am also confused about what your focus area ...

    Tue Mar 15, 2016 7:21 pm
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Lost Girl

    this story is soooo good and i love the journey that ling goes on your historical facts really help explain buddhism i like your characters a lot and bijong especially

    Tue Mar 15, 2016 7:16 pm


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