summerlovee

I am trying to spam your whole comments place xD Sorry my computer lagged and I didn't know I posted it 4 times and now I don't know how to ...

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I like these chapters :D There are really good (: I would love to read more

Um well it is awkward if I say you should continue it, but you should. Not for wrong reasons but for the fact that I am simply amazed that you ...

Definitely keep writing this!! No bad comments to write. When you write the next chapter write on my wall and I will review it!!

This is good! I really enjoyed it. But just a little thing, I think the characters need a little more depth. How about just desribing them more. Other than that ...

Hey guys just saying this is free verse and it's fast pace. let's say poetry, I am not really good at, but I want to be. So please help me ...

Great! I read the first one and so far loving it!! Sorry I have no errors I found in here so I can't really help you... but I really like ...

I read your thing about how you aren't goin to post chapter four until three gets a proper review so here i am because if you don't post chapter four ...

OMG!!! Is it me or is every story you write just so fantastic and eveything!!! I am lost for words that describe this! Literally, please get your works published (: ...

Beautifully writtern really although I felt sorry for Nate xD Nice Keep writing ~

:O Nice~ This was really good and so was the descriptions I liked it when she just gived up and decided to accept the change xD

WOW! I am jealous not about the whole heartbreaking part but the love part the descriptions you used were so real and breathtaking It carried a lot of emotional baggage ...

HAHA! I love it when David says we aare family and it's like 'don't ask' xD Very well writtern like the previous ones I look forward to reading more (:

WOW!!! This is clearly personal and writtern from the heart! I really like this its absolutely brilliant! Nice~