summerlovee

I have been having some doubts in life. Like why I get pressured to always getting the top marks. This is my story.Help would be aprreciated and don't bother correcting ...

This is a true love poem, yes i really do like someone. This is a free verse and obviously i suck at poems so just give me maybe better words ...

Ok I get this is meant to be emotional but this is too fast paced, I mean it doesn't describe anything. Also I don't think a father would say 'babe' ...

This was so good, as soon as I saw cards cannot cry I realised that it was the voice of the card. That is a very good idea and I ...

This is just truly touching and sad and a lot more I read it and it was beautiful then i read the last paragraph and read it all over again, ...

I am already in love with this! Its a story of stupid teenage boys and their partying and stuff! This is exactly the sort of writing I like!!! No bad ...

OMG!! This is so good. It's funny while actually making sense :D Also it has a very casual type of writing that I really like :D I absolutely loved it ...

This was good, a good start. But there were a few problems with this. I feel as if this is rushed and it's not in detail like Hey!" I said, ...

OMG! Childhood lovers always turn out to like each other xD This is so good I mean its so unpredictable :D I love these Keep writing

Absolutely amazing! I know I am going to love these short stories! Please keep writing them and just a qusetion are these short story going to be linked together apart ...

FINALLY! She gave birth, but this novel still has to go on!!! :D Ooh Tomas :P Thats cute if she wasn't married with 2 kids xD Pleasee keep writing them ...

This is so good! I like the whole plot the script is based on. Its confusing but for me it held a certain interst to make me read it about ...

This poem is amazing. If only I could have writtern it :l Anyways I really liked this part: Out of the corner of my eye, I see you. In the ...

I really like this poem!! Althpugh some of the reason is because my birthday is in spring xD I love how you describe the nature wonders that happen on spring ...

OH MY GOSH! These are like soo good!!! I really liked the first and the third and fourth :D The first one, I admire you for going down on the ...