summerlovee

Oh my gosh. This was like the best story ever :D I noticed how you said 1st chapter? So there's going to be more right? There should be!! I can't ...

Hey, Well I am in love with twilight (Taylor, :D) so no complaints there. I am ok at drawing and to me, your drawing looks decent (: I like how ...

Hi, I loved your poem and you perfectly described a player xD I have no bad comments for this (: i really liked these 2 paragraphs You are the charmer ...

haha Ive been across one of them before and ur poem is right (: In the end you wake up to reality well just one problem the rhyming seems a ...

this was so good (: wait theres goin to be more chapters right? There better be !

This kinda made me think about what i thought of homeless people again xD This poems rhythm and flow was really good and i have nothing bad to say about ...

This would be a good song (: Just one thing "don't you dare fall" that didn't work with me but you choose also try to put in more other verses ...

This is not a poetry even though its listed under the poetry genre. Also I know I haven't put capital letters and Im not that great with grammar so... yeah. ...

This poem exactly describes how i feel and probably alot of other girls ! I love how you took a realistic thing in society and put it in a poem ...

That was really good and painfully true to most :l I guess we're all a bunch of sheeps... I totally get what you mean, like sometimes i want to shake ...

I never read anything so short and direct but yet still convey the same feelings as others that are longer ! This is excellent :P

O_o this was soo good im so shocked someone can come up with this xD your so talented at writin poetry so don't stop (:

This was good, i got engaged really quickly (: i normally don't hand out negative comments and im not going to start now because this is really good! I suck ...

This is really good (: i enjoyed reading it and i realy suck at poetry so i don't know how you can find a rhyming word for each xD Kepp ...

This would be a good ballad with the rhythm and everything. Just one thing "missing-you weather" this didn't really work with me but its your choice (: Overall its really ...