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Re: Why
Hi. I'm Kate. I'll be your critic for today. Why must you love me? - CLICHE! At the very beginning, to boot! :shock: Gosh. Why won't people stop doing that ...
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Re: Le Poem
Hi. I'm Kate. I'll be your critic for today. First off, the title. "Le Poem"? This isn't even French, mon ami . I understand it's in there for humour, but ...
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Re: Lonely
Hi. Kate here. I'll be your reviewer for today. Lonely isn’t a person, Who can I blame? Lonely isn’t a thing, What can I blame? By golly, the poem meets ...
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Re: Innocence
The big brown eyes - 'the' should be 'her'. they coo her naivety - 'coo'? I'm afraid I don't catch your gist. The small red lips - 'the' should be ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: As You Like It (Title subject to change)
I promise you a review. I'll review this as soon as I finish homework... or probably tomorrow... so please expect one from me nonetheless. But first... ((likes)) good job. You ...
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Re: Small Steps
D'AWWWWW~! What a nice piece this is! And it's short, making it convenient for me to review even though I'm busy with homework... YES, I'M BUSY WITH HOMEWORK. I'm dawdling ...
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Re: It Doesn't Matter
Hi. I'm Kate. Applaud, for you've got two reviewers by the name "KATE" all in one day! Be astounded, commoner! XD AHEM. Anyway. Off to the review. Ah... Thank you ...
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Re: Rain
Hi there! I'm Kate, and welcome to YWS! Seeing that you gave such a lengthy review on my work, "Sunny Side Up!" (which I've already edited, by the way), I'm ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: The blue that colors heaven....
I have a poem with the same title, but of course, with a different gist. I'll post if I can. But let me take a break for today... but rest ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: Is this a good name?
It's unique and it sounds mystic and all that... so I don't see why not.
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Re: Sugary Sweet:)
You like my type? Man, that's sweet of you. :3 The Hulk? OHYESINDEED. 8D Kate is awesome and strong and awesome like that. But I think you mean Jekyll and ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: Breakfast Troubles - Sunny Side Up!
[ A/N: Random idea. Rip it up to bits.] Breakfast Troubles; Day One Sunny Side Up! Morning. I got up from bed, bewildered by sudden blaring of the alarm. Groggily, ...
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Re: Death of an Athiest, and Death of a Thiest
Death of an Athiest: I lay on my soon-to-be death bed, - Edited. Better? Black roses be at my feet, - Sounds Shakespearean when you do it like this, no? ...
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Re: Sins
...I'll be back to review this later. I'm off to nom on a chocolate bar to replenish my energy, now, but I want you to know that this is cool. ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: Crazed
Hi. I'm Kate. Welcome to YWS. :D First of all, don't think I'll go easy on you just because you're new... :twisted: Just kidding! Now... First I want to spell ...
Feb 2, 2010
