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Re: The Liquid Goddess
Twin sapphires glint and glimmer through her hair Which trails in gel-stiff tendrils down her back, And yet I saw those dazzling stones in Claire’s Half-price last week for gem-stud ...
Feb 2, 2008 -
Re: The Voyager: From Death to Life
The first stanza starts beautifully, and I love the contrast of a lily representing purity floating down the Styx. However, I have to be harsh about the forth line and ...
Feb 2, 2008 -
Re: Desperation in Monte Carlo
I have to say I love the form of this piece - it keeps you spinning like the roulette, but is still subtle enough not to labour the point. On ...
Feb 2, 2008
