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  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Liquid Goddess

    Twin sapphires glint and glimmer through her hair Which trails in gel-stiff tendrils down her back, And yet I saw those dazzling stones in Claire’s Half-price last week for gem-stud ...

    Feb 2, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Voyager: From Death to Life

    The first stanza starts beautifully, and I love the contrast of a lily representing purity floating down the Styx. However, I have to be harsh about the forth line and ...

    Feb 2, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Desperation in Monte Carlo

    I have to say I love the form of this piece - it keeps you spinning like the roulette, but is still subtle enough not to labour the point. On ...

    Feb 2, 2008


Sea and Sky- both blue. Once, in proposal, Sea turned red. Sky's father- Sun forbade so she wept as rain, uniting the lovers in defiance.
— AlexWrites