sugarcube888

The exclamation point isn't needed. Got'cha! I'll fix that... "Instead of being in a normal position in the sky, it turned out to be moving from one part of the ...

There. I edited A LOT of it. I hope you like the NEW chapter 1. I sure hope that it's descriptive enough for ya'll!

I think I will combine the prologue and this chapter. Thanks!

the planet he lives on Earth? No, it's called Genoa. I changed the wording so that it sounds better. I think it was boring and confusing. Because this is the ...

Fine Aushy, I'll do everything that you suggested, and I'll even fix the spelling errors. But I will not, and I mean, WILL NOT, (calms down) change the questionmark/exclamation mark ...