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Re: Love me, Michelle (Please critique!)
Wow!What an awesome piece!You have a wonderful way of describing everything with a bit of irony and humor.What i really liked was the way you effortlessly managed to build the ...
Sep 9, 2008 -
Re: School
yeah....well once in tenth grade during biology class our teacher,Mrs indira was asking some of us to volunteer to read out loud from the textbook.i used to read read pretty ...
Sep 8, 2008 -
Re: I Hate Emo
at my school there werent any emos!!actually..i dont even think half the kids knew what it means only!!LOL!
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: The User Below You...
nope! the person below me is bugged with the world?!
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: im new!!
thanks alwaysawriter!!!!! whats your name?? if you dont want to tell that....well could i call you a.a.w? i'm too lazy to type your whole name !!:P
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: im new!!
Heya Jasmine!Thanks for offering to help! India's great!!!Its really sad that you guys dont get to know much of Indian culture,you would be really interested and also shocked, I think!! ...
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: The User Below You...
hehe..welll there are a lot of things that I should be doing,but I which I am not! the person below me loves to read harry potter!
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: The User Below You...
nope!!i just joined here today!! well have been here ever since i joined :) the person below me is an emo :P
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: im new!!
[b]heyyy everyone!!!im Sadhana,a 16yr old student from India!Call me Sudz please! im a math student basically but my ultimate ambition is to become a writer.even my grandfather was a writer ...
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: A love I always had
To those it may concern: This is a religious poem please don’t let that be your basis for your critique ------------------------------------------- I am lost and more lonely then before He ...
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: A love I always had
To those it may concern: This is a religious poem please don’t let that be your basis for your critique ------------------------------------------- I am lost and more lonely then before He ...
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: Loss
WOW!! its like i can imagine my self in the characters shoes perfectly.well....not exactly but yea the emotions you described are so true to every crush!!good work!
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: Love.
hm...i agree with the sofi though your piece was quite cynical it conveyed what you thought with remarkable calrity!! it got me thinking about what love means to me and ...
Sep 7, 2008
